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As I see into your eyes
I fall to my knees
And I cry deep inside.

I witness all of the anger
All of the pain..
And I plead for the power
To pry it away.

Fallen to my knees,
Clutching at the Earth,
I scream into the Heavens,
For a single precious moment.

Merely one moment for you
To see within my heart...
To truly see
How much you mean to me.
©2003-2009 ~toophysical
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:iconchronoflmzon:
cool.... deffinately very emotional.... good job i really see where ur comin from

-joe aka Chrono
:iconheartofadragon:
i know this feeling very well
nice expression
:iconblackravenwing:
"Merely one moment for you
To see within my heart...
To truly see
How much you mean to me. "

*sighs softly* i can relate so well. Its a great poem, emotional and expressional (is that a word?).
:icondulcinea:
Tragically beautiful...I love this.

--
"The aim of love is to love; no more, and no less"--Oscar Wilde
:nod: :heart:
:iconm1ch:
gosh...
the desperation...
wow.
:iconondabrinkosanity:
wow omg. this is fantastically simply and beautiful. The words you chose made it so powerful. I can see the person falling and then screaming up towards the sky i can almost feel the pain. Great job i really love this
:iconfenton:
I moment can be a lifetime it's very cool

--
Reason has no logic, stop expecting everything to make sense

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